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Sing Me to My Death, Vampire by ~GreenEyedMaiden:iconGreenEyedMaiden:



Rip out my heart,
Seduce me with your dark art.
Your hunger will not suffice,
For my heart is just a piece of ice.

Hold me in your cold embrace,
Cover me in silk and lace.
Allow me to feel the pain,
As you bite into my pulsing vein.

Capture my soul with your eyes,
In there lies an ember that never dies.
I want to love you for eternity,
So drain me of my mortality.

Oh my vampire sing me a song,
Sing it to me, soft and long.
Until my last breath,
Oh welcome me into immortal death.
©2005-2009 ~GreenEyedMaiden
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Author's Comments

I was watching the storm outside my window last night and it inspired me to write this vampire poem. It was beautiful last night with the lightning and rolling thunder. I was just listening to the song by Annie Lennox, "A Love song to a Vampire" I believe. Not to mention I am fascinated by death and vampires. So that helped as well :D.

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:iconcelaksa:
i like it alot good job

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out of my mind be back in five....yrs...mayb...
:icongreeneyedmaiden:
Thank you very much! :D I appreciate the fav. :hug:

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"I like the stars. It's the illusion of permanence, I think. I mean, they're always flaring up and caving in and going out. But from here, I can pretend... I can pretend that things last. "-(Destruction)
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:iconcelaksa:
hey keep up the good work that was awesome i wish i could b that good =)

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out of my mind be back in five....yrs...mayb...
:icongreeneyedmaiden:
Awww I like writing, but I'm pretty much an novice at writing. Thank you! :D

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"I like the stars. It's the illusion of permanence, I think. I mean, they're always flaring up and caving in and going out. But from here, I can pretend... I can pretend that things last. "-(Destruction)
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:iconcadoangelus:
Excellent work my dear, definite :+favlove: only suggestion i can make is the spelling on vein, assuming thats the word you are looking for :)

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers, between supposed brothers"

I am a member of ~burn-p0etry and ~Horse-Fan-Club
:icongreeneyedmaiden:
Yep that's what I ment :D thanks for not making fun, I love to write but spelling sometimes is not my forte. Thnk you for the fav :glomp:

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"I like the stars. It's the illusion of permanence, I think. I mean, they're always flaring up and caving in and going out. But from here, I can pretend... I can pretend that things last. "-(Destruction)
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:iconcelaksa:
i think ur writin is awesome ur welcome

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out of my mind be back in five....yrs...mayb...
:iconpoem-chick:
that is beautiful i have never reed something as good as this it is short but i can tell what you are getting at and thankx for showing me that love is not always that easy and yes it was just from this short poem

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In the gutter goes all my pain and sorrow for i am my own person

And into the gutter also goes my love for guys because they can never be what they tell you they are

I will be forever in the gutter of sorrow
:icongreeneyedmaiden:
"True love never did run smooth," yes I am glad that it had an impact on you. :D

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"I like the stars. It's the illusion of permanence, I think. I mean, they're always flaring up and caving in and going out. But from here, I can pretend... I can pretend that things last. "-(Destruction)
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